Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Passion Time

Today at passion time I carried on with poetry.


I am doing poetry because I love it and I want to know some poetry skills.
At passion time Darryn helped me with a poem and gave me A LOT of ideas!


The poem I am working at now is a wet autumn poem that I am doing in free verse. 
Free verse is were there is no rules apart from get rid of a word if you don't need it and if you can try  to replace two or three words with one word.
One of my favourite lines is: 


People hurrying indoors, shaking the rain drops off their umbrellas, tugging off soaking coats racing to make a hot chocolate!


I like passion time because it is super fun but super challenging!      

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